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The Biggest Blimp in the World

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The Biggest Blimp in the World


I started to inhale.
I notice air filling up in me.
I look down at my stomach as it began growing.
I kept inhaling and I kept swelling.
My arms were blowing up and my legs were getting thicker.
It came to me that I was blowing up like a balloon.

My clothes started to stretch, feeling tighter and tighter, I'm afraid they might burst.
I suddenly felt lightness under my feet.
I was floating like I was a balloon.

I rose up to the ceiling, still swelling.
I feel cushy and light all over, but looked like a human ball.
I used my hands to swim in the air and made it to the window and opened it.
I got stuck,
So I pushed and pushed and made it free.

Now I am floating above the city from the warehouse
And I was still swelling.
I was now the size of a blimp, but now, I was floating away from the city, smaller and smaller it became and I was getting bigger and bigger.
I could only see clouds from this view.

Bigger and bigger I swelled, higher and higher I rose.
I was now the shape of an extra large moon, like one of Jupiter's
I went passed the sun, blocking, then into the solar system.
I was getting too big, I didn't know why.
I'm afraid I might pop or explode, but still I kept swelling.

When it stopped, I was bigger than all the planets around me.
With that, my head was small and there was no chance of seeing my hands and feet, but I moved backward, floating around the emptiness.
Then, I saw a space probe, looking at me as scientists looked back. They all cheered and hugged each other.

I knew then that they thought I was a planet, but I was now loved no matter what I looked like.
My very, very first writing in body inflation. Reading some works on here got me thinking if those writers were inspired by this. Enjoy!
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InflationFormation's avatar
"they all cheered and hugged each other"

beautiful. The rhythm looks like it's a translation from some tongue.

it has a feel of meditation, or a fantasy that has to accompany an asana - if they have yoga in imaginary world.